Find and correct mistakes in parallel structures in the following sentences, give the scientific reason for each number

Find and correct mistakes in parallel structures in the following

sentences, give the scientific reason for each number

1) Steel is alloyed with manganese to increase its strength, hardness and

resistant to wear.

2) Sacramento is the commercial, industry, and financial center of

California's Central Valley, as well as being the state capital.

3) When taking part in winter sports, one should wear clothing that is

lightweight, warmth, and suitable for the activity.

4) Folklore consists of the beliefs, customs, traditions, and telling stories that

people pass from generation to generation.

5) Because of their hardness, industrial diamonds can be used for cutting, to

grind, and drilling.

6) By obeying the speed limit, we can save energy, lives and it costs us less.

7) My home offers me a feeling of security, warm, and love.

8) The pioneers labored to clear away the forest and planting crops.

9) When I refused to help her, she became very angry and shout at me.

10) In my spare time, I enjoy taking care of my aquarium and to work on my

stamp collection.

Jawaban :

1) Steel is alloyed with manganese to increase its strength, hardness, and resistance to wear.

2) Sacramento is the commercial, industrial, and financial center of California's Central Valley, as well as being the state capital.

3) When taking part in winter sports, one should wear clothing that is lightweight, warm, and suitable for the activity.

4) Folklore consists of the beliefs, customs, traditions, and stories that people pass from generation to generation.

5) Because of their hardness, industrial diamonds can be used for cutting, grinding, and drilling.

6) By obeying the speed limit, we can save energy, lives, and money.

7) My home offers me a feeling of security, warmth, and love.

8) The pioneers labored to clear away the forest and plant crops.

9) When I refused to help her, she became very angry and shouted at me.

10) In my spare time, I enjoy taking care of my aquarium and working on my stamp collection.

Penjelasan:

1) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan menambahkan kata "resistance" setelah "hardness" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

2) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan menambahkan kata "industrial" setelah "commercial" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

3) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan mengganti kata "warmth" menjadi "warm" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

4) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan menghilangkan kata "telling" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

5) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan mengubah kata "to grind" menjadi "grinding" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

6) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan menambahkan kata "money" setelah "lives" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

7) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan mengganti kata "warm" menjadi "warmth" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

8) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan mengganti kata "planting" menjadi "plant" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

9) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan mengubah kata "shout" menjadi "shouted" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

10) Perbaikan dilakukan dengan mengubah kata "to work" menjadi "working" agar struktur paralel terjaga.

Kesimpulan:

Kesalahan dalam struktur paralel telah diperbaiki dengan menyesuaikan penggunaan kata dan menghilangkan kata yang tidak sesuai dalam setiap kalimat. Struktur paralel yang benar adalah penting dalam penulisan untuk memastikan kalimat memiliki keseimbangan dan kelancaran.